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alasse_fae) wrote2007-11-27 10:57 pm
alasse_fae) wrote2007-11-27 10:57 pm
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Cut to the dog...
Now that I have "won" and so am allowed to stop and think, and actually finish scenes, I am running into a wee bit of trouble.
So, paying mind to David Hewlett's comments in the Dog's Breakfast extras about when not knowing how to end a scene, just cut to the dog, I am contemplating adding in paragraphs
Ohscur the fluffy dog trotted by, chin turned up as he preened for their amusement. Everyone laughed and the tension was broken. "Someone get that dog a bone," said Gizzie.
and, being reminded that I am writing way too many bright and sunny days, and this is England, FCOL:
Oshcur the fluffy dog, looking for all the world like a drowned rat, trotted into their midst, and shook himself, scattering rain drops over all the people. Fluffy once again, he trotted back off.
So, paying mind to David Hewlett's comments in the Dog's Breakfast extras about when not knowing how to end a scene, just cut to the dog, I am contemplating adding in paragraphs
Ohscur the fluffy dog trotted by, chin turned up as he preened for their amusement. Everyone laughed and the tension was broken. "Someone get that dog a bone," said Gizzie.
and, being reminded that I am writing way too many bright and sunny days, and this is England, FCOL:
Oshcur the fluffy dog, looking for all the world like a drowned rat, trotted into their midst, and shook himself, scattering rain drops over all the people. Fluffy once again, he trotted back off.
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